Here are some thumbnails of buildings I did for my What if? Metropolis. I was testing how to convey motion in the building structure by adding lines that suggest movement. I used what we learnt on Monday to help me build them from shapes and adding the detail later. I think 12 to 19 was the most successful in term of conveying motion but i really like the aesthetic of 1 to 6.
Hi Katerin,
ReplyDeleteAn excellent analysis of the 'American Dream'in relation to 'Edward Scissorhands' :)
Just a couple of pointers - you introduce 'Esmeralda' as one of the neighbours that make life difficult for Edward,but do not really expand on how she does this - imagine that your reader has no idea of the film...would you have given them enough information?
After your quotes, you just need the author's surname and the date, not the full name and book details. Also, in the bibliography, you should have the author's surname first, followed by their initial - these are then listed alphabetically by surname, so for example,
Bloggs, J.
Davis, D.
Smith, J.
make sure that your names always have capital letters