This is a test animatic I created from the panels in my storyboard in order to show me how my story will look. From this animatic, I have learned that there are areas in my storyboard that need improving and I need to add extra scenes in order to make the story more cohesive. overall this has been a learning experience for me in understanding how to go about creating an animatic and I hope with the next one there is an improvement.
Hi Katerin,
ReplyDeleteAn excellent analysis of the 'American Dream'in relation to 'Edward Scissorhands' :)
Just a couple of pointers - you introduce 'Esmeralda' as one of the neighbours that make life difficult for Edward,but do not really expand on how she does this - imagine that your reader has no idea of the film...would you have given them enough information?
After your quotes, you just need the author's surname and the date, not the full name and book details. Also, in the bibliography, you should have the author's surname first, followed by their initial - these are then listed alphabetically by surname, so for example,
Bloggs, J.
Davis, D.
Smith, J.
make sure that your names always have capital letters