There's a wonderful, shimmery richness to these images, Katerin - but I think there are opportunities for crisping up some of the details to further enhance your world. I feel there should be more detailing and shaping of those onion domes: they're reading a bit flat and 'splodgy' to me - and I wonder if you were to look at some additional real world reference in terms of how those domes might actually be fabricated, then you'd have more stuff to work with:
http://dighist.fas.harvard.edu/courses/2015/HUM54/exhibits/show/post_sovietchurch/saint_basils. (not the colours - the structural detailing)
I also think you need to think more about using the blue reflected light more completely - it would absolutely be effecting the roof of the cave, picking out ridges and detail etc and I think introducing some accent blue rim-lighting in your low angle shot would energise your architecture with some uplighting. Finally, I just think you should seek to improve the perspective of your domes, as they're struggling to communicate their lovely shape in both images.
There's a wonderful, shimmery richness to these images, Katerin - but I think there are opportunities for crisping up some of the details to further enhance your world. I feel there should be more detailing and shaping of those onion domes: they're reading a bit flat and 'splodgy' to me - and I wonder if you were to look at some additional real world reference in terms of how those domes might actually be fabricated, then you'd have more stuff to work with:
ReplyDeletehttp://dighist.fas.harvard.edu/courses/2015/HUM54/exhibits/show/post_sovietchurch/saint_basils. (not the colours - the structural detailing)
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Onion_dome#/media/File:Kostroma_resurrection.jpg
I also think you need to think more about using the blue reflected light more completely - it would absolutely be effecting the roof of the cave, picking out ridges and detail etc and I think introducing some accent blue rim-lighting in your low angle shot would energise your architecture with some uplighting. Finally, I just think you should seek to improve the perspective of your domes, as they're struggling to communicate their lovely shape in both images.
Thanks for the feedback i will look in to it, i was thinking the same thing but i did not know how to exactly achieve it.
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