There's a wonderful, shimmery richness to these images, Katerin - but I think there are opportunities for crisping up some of the details to further enhance your world. I feel there should be more detailing and shaping of those onion domes: they're reading a bit flat and 'splodgy' to me - and I wonder if you were to look at some additional real world reference in terms of how those domes might actually be fabricated, then you'd have more stuff to work with:
http://dighist.fas.harvard.edu/courses/2015/HUM54/exhibits/show/post_sovietchurch/saint_basils. (not the colours - the structural detailing)
I also think you need to think more about using the blue reflected light more completely - it would absolutely be effecting the roof of the cave, picking out ridges and detail etc and I think introducing some accent blue rim-lighting in your low angle shot would energise your architecture with some uplighting. Finally, I just think you should seek to improve the perspective of your domes, as they're struggling to communicate their lovely shape in both images.
Here my mind map ideas for the prompt words we received on Tuesday. The mind map contains prompt words that have something to do with the words or things that relate to that word. Some of them are more driven from the ideas I have had for a stories.
Here is a draft of my Script for Fantastic Voyage looking at making the narrator be a friendly character in my animation so as to engage the audience with the learning.
There's a wonderful, shimmery richness to these images, Katerin - but I think there are opportunities for crisping up some of the details to further enhance your world. I feel there should be more detailing and shaping of those onion domes: they're reading a bit flat and 'splodgy' to me - and I wonder if you were to look at some additional real world reference in terms of how those domes might actually be fabricated, then you'd have more stuff to work with:
ReplyDeletehttp://dighist.fas.harvard.edu/courses/2015/HUM54/exhibits/show/post_sovietchurch/saint_basils. (not the colours - the structural detailing)
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Onion_dome#/media/File:Kostroma_resurrection.jpg
I also think you need to think more about using the blue reflected light more completely - it would absolutely be effecting the roof of the cave, picking out ridges and detail etc and I think introducing some accent blue rim-lighting in your low angle shot would energise your architecture with some uplighting. Finally, I just think you should seek to improve the perspective of your domes, as they're struggling to communicate their lovely shape in both images.
Thanks for the feedback i will look in to it, i was thinking the same thing but i did not know how to exactly achieve it.
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