Here are some thumbnails of buildings I did for my What if? Metropolis. I was testing how to convey motion in the building structure by adding lines that suggest movement. I used what we learnt on Monday to help me build them from shapes and adding the detail later. I think 12 to 19 was the most successful in term of conveying motion but i really like the aesthetic of 1 to 6.
Hey Katerin - all good interesting stuff in here.... but you've got no back-up! No supporting quotes (Star witnesses to help prove your points) etc. One of the guiding principles of your reviews is that you use supporting evidence etc because this gets you into the habit of reading and researching around your subject to ensure you a) know what's out there in support of your discussion and b) to trigger lines of enquiry you perhaps hadn't even considered. It's one of the things we need to get you doing quickly and with confidence, so let's see you working with evidence for your next review.
ReplyDeleteAlso - I'd consider neutralising your blog template and going for something a bit more simple and clean: take a look at Karris' blog for example - clean, tidy, easy on the eye :)
http://karrispalmer.blogspot.com
Hi Katerin,
ReplyDeleteWell done on getting your first review out there :)
Phil has beaten me to it - yes, you must read what other people have written about the films, and use some of their ideas to support your own discussion.
Also, if you are mentioning other films, you should also include the date they were made the first time you mention them (in brackets after the name of the film), and the names of the films should be in italics.
Looking forward to reading your next review!