Here is my second draft after the feed back I changed the Narrator from a character to a voice but a kept his chatty side. I feel by doing this it keeps the audience engaged with the learning side of things. I also made the script more about the journey of the different energy types within the power plant as they come together to create electricity, rather than just explaining it.
Here is a draft of my Script for Fantastic Voyage looking at making the narrator be a friendly character in my animation so as to engage the audience with the learning.
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