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@Phil Fantastic Voyage: Script Draft two


Here is my second draft after the feed back I changed the Narrator from a character to a voice but a kept his chatty side. I feel by doing this it keeps the audience engaged with the learning side of things. I also made the script more about the journey of the different energy types within the power plant as they come together to create electricity, rather than just explaining it.

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