@Phil Fantastic Voyage: Script Draft two

Here is my second draft after the feed back I changed the Narrator from a character to a voice but a kept his chatty side. I feel by doing this it keeps the audience engaged with the learning side of things. I also made the script more about the journey of the different energy types within the power plant as they come together to create electricity, rather than just explaining it.

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Premise: Animatic Test

This is a test animatic I created from the panels in my storyboard in order to show me how my story will look. From this animatic, I have learned that there are areas in my storyboard that need improving and I need to add extra scenes in order to make the story more cohesive. overall this has been a learning experience for me in understanding how to go about creating an animatic and I hope with the next one there is an improvement.

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