From Script to Screen: Story Two

Story Two: Ending One

The story follows two main characters on their mission to steal a briefcase from a group of pirates.

The first shot opens with an establishing shot of the heist plan they have been making for months as it zooms into the map the camera brings the audience attention to several key photos on it. First is the briefcase second is the Airship of the pirates at the layout of it.

As the camera zooms into a photo of the docked ship it transitions onto our main Character and his partner as they watch the pirates get of waiting for their moment to get on the ship and find the briefcase.

As they are entering the ship the main characters partner speaks and says, “This is a bad idea we should turn back what if we get caught”. As the main Character turns and assures him that everything would be find and tells him that they can’t turn back after months of planning.

When they arrive at the briefcase, they hear footsteps and relies someone is on the ship and they need to quickly make there way out of the there. As they look at the map of the ship, they quickly find an ideal exist and successfully run away.

In the final shot the main character opens the briefcase after they have reached a safe location, as they see what’s inside the briefcase there faces look shocked, and then it cuts to the end.

Story Two: Ending Two

The story follows two main characters on their mission to steal a briefcase from a group of pirates.

The first shot opens with an establishing shot of the heist plan they have been making for months as it zooms into the map the camera brings the audience attention to several key photos on it. First is the briefcase second is the Airship of the pirates at the layout of it.

As the camera zooms into a photo of the docked ship it transitions onto our main Character and his partner as they watch the pirates get of waiting for their moment to get on the ship and find the briefcase.

As they are entering the ship the main characters partner speaks and says, “This is a bad idea we should turn back what if we get caught”. As the main Character turns and assures him that everything would be find and tells him that they can’t turn back after months of planning.

Well they are making they are making their way to the briefcase the camera transitions to a shot of the briefcase and what awaits inside it. Showing the audience, a ticking bomb.

The camera then transitions back to the main characters as they arrive at the briefcase as they hear someone’s footsteps with no time to see what’s inside the briefcase, they quickly find a way out of the ship. Before reaching the end the camera transitions again to the timer and back to the camera.

In the end shot we see are main character and his partner who is carrying the briefcase about to make it out but as this happens the briefcase explodes and the partner dies with the main character in shock the animation ends.

After the feedback I changed my story but I'm still underside on witch ending to take. ending two will have a more satisfying end two the story then ending one.